Bring me my Bow of burning gold; Bring me my Arrows of desire: Bring me my Spear: O clouds unfold! Bring me my Chariot of fire!
its by William Blake..master of verse and prose.. but u know what? With all due rsIn this case..your verse sounds even more passionate, felt and expressed the desire more effectively! and that too..just four lines!
Four extraordinary lines..i say extraordinary cuz 'awesome' doesnt suit this type of creation..'awesome' is a daily-word..but u have four much more rare and beautiful lines there!
No dear..... come down and catch your dreams.... :):)
ReplyDeletedats one of the most amazing 4 lines i have read in a long tym!!!
ReplyDeleteLet it better not be a dream !! Let it be the reality. Amazing !
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ReplyDeletewoa..dats beautiful!
ReplyDeletechek dis..one of the most famous lines ever:
Bring me my Bow of burning gold;
Bring me my Arrows of desire:
Bring me my Spear: O clouds unfold!
Bring me my Chariot of fire!
its by William Blake..master of verse and prose..
but u know what? With all due rsIn this case..your verse sounds even more passionate, felt and expressed the desire more effectively! and that too..just four lines!
Four extraordinary lines..i say extraordinary cuz 'awesome' doesnt suit this type of creation..'awesome' is a daily-word..but u have four much more rare and beautiful lines there!