A drop of dew slithering down,
Past the leaf veins.....all alone;
Tracing its way to the edge..
Wating to drop down to the wretch!!
Be the droplet a nascent rainlet?
Or the crown of the heir leaflet?
Ot the flowing tear of a broken fate?
Or just the traveller's charm bait?
Mysteries endless.....
Seekers clueless......
A dew drop helpless.....
Ah.. There it is-----Beauty Flawless!
amazing!!! short and precise with emotions abound behind it!
ReplyDeletefantastikkkk........never drop ur pen.....cntinue the gud wrk.....
ReplyDelete<3 dis blog....
mzt yaar.....nyc combination f wrdz....
ReplyDeleteSo Simple, So Beautiful! :) Loved it!
ReplyDeleteelegant embodiment of beautiful thoughts...bravo!!!! keep 'em cumin..
ReplyDeleteAhhh!!
ReplyDeleteIf you had to say something in ten words, and if there were only ten such words that could convey all you wanted to say in the prettiest possible manner.. you would hit those exact ten words, EVERY BLOODY TIME! Such is your precision.. and beauty just runs through your thoughts!
I am jealous.. and awe-struck!
Two suggestions:
1> Try and keep your fonts and text size consistent.
2> Just put everything else on the back-burner and jump into writing. Phull time!! :-)
as i'd said sis, dis is my absolute favourite!
ReplyDeleteU kno d best feeling i have evrytym i read dis(yes! i'v read million tyms may b!)? its dat i'm not reading sm poem book of sm well known poet but i'm readin smthn writtn by a sweetheart whom i kno 1st hand! :D
to b precise, i KNOW smbody with such beautiful imagination n talent ofcourse! B-)